proszę o sprawdzenie Inspektor Drake was interviewing Miss Darling nephew - Gregory Sykes about her death. Inspektor asked him did he see someone or something strange in front of her house and Gregory answer him, that he saw only gardner and his dog. After that Inspektor Drake went into the garden to ask a few questions gardner. Inspektor asked Mr. Bates how did he find Miss Darling's body. Mr Bates answered , that he went to see her yesterday evening. She was lying dead on the flor in the study when he found her. Inspektor asked Mr. Bates what did he do yesterday afternoom. Gardner said, that he was working in the garden while Miss Darling was writing in her study. Finaly, Inspektor Drake found a piece of Miss Darling's dress, half buried in the garden. It was covered in blood. This story hasn't solution, but I think, that Gregory Sykes killed Miss Darling, becouse then he inherit her money. dam 6 za znalezienie błędów ;)

w ostatniej linijce becouse- pisze sie because mysle ze reszta jest good:D

because.

tak wiem, ale to akurat z pośpiechu, bo i tak to będę mówic, chodzi mi o błędy typu zły czas, złe przyimki itp.

Dobrze, czytając nie będzie różnicy ;)

Wygląda na ok. :)

- inspeCtor, nie inspektor :) - w drugim zdaniu zastosowałabym pytanie w reported speech: Inspector asked him if he saw anyone or anything strange in front of her house and Gregory answerED him, ... - ... inspector Drake went to the garden to ask a few questions to the gardEner - możesz użyć też innego czasownika: went to the garden to investigate the gardener. - parę literówek: gardEner, floOr, afternooN, finalLy, - brakuje mi jakiegoś przedimka w zdaniu "This story hasn't solution", możesz wstawić "This story hasn't got any solution" albo po prostu "a solution" - w ostatnim zdaniu musisz sprecyzować: "because then he will inherit her money" (czas przyszły) albo "because then he inherits her money" (tryb warunkowy) Z mojej strony to wszystko :)