In the summer i was at the seaside. I was there for two weeks. I the first week the sun was shining. And then it rained so then i sat still in the bar. I played with friends in the pool. They i went on a caone(kayaks) with my dad. For two days it rained all the time but they sailed. Every day was an outbreak and ewvest for the morning Błagam czy dobrze?

dobrze ale to rozwiń bardziej ponieważ to jest za mało

In the summer i was at the seaside. I was at the seaside in the summer. (zachowujemy kolejność w takich prostych zdaniach- osoba+czasownik+reszta zdania) I was there for two weeks. I the first week the sun was shining. The sun was shining during the first week. ( najpierw osoba- w tym przypadku "sun" a potem co się działo z tym słońcem) And then it started to rain so then i sat still in the bar. Then it started to rain so I spent much time sitting in a bar. I played with friends in the pool. I also played with friend in the pool. They i went on a caone(kayaks) with my dad. Then I went on a canoe with my dad. For two days it rained all the time but they sailed. It rained all the time for two days but they sailed. ( they, czyli kto? bo wcześniej pisałaś o kajaku z tatą) Every day was an outbreak and ewvest for the morning (nie wiem co chciałaś napisać w tym zdaniu) Pamietaj, żeby budować proste, poprawne gramatycznie zdania w danym czasie, a potem możesz upiększać wypracowanie słówkami, przymiotnikami. To wypracowanie jak najbardziej można rozwinąć. Wydarzenia powinny być ułożone w logicznej kolejności.